What did you do in order to make your description more vivid in this poem, that you want to use on your next writing piece, NO MATTER WHAT IT’S ABOUT? I really liked how I wrote how she felt betrayed by her father, but strengthened by her mom. In the next writing piece, I would like to write how they feel when something that affects the person strongly happens.
What did you learn about doing effective research about your “client” through interviews? I learned how to ask more questions to get deeper and much more information.
What parts of the revision process were most useful to you? What do you want to make sure you do to revise your next writing piece, based on your experience with this one? I think that the process in which we were told if something in our poem can apply to many people and not only to the person we wanted it to was really helpful, and helped me be way more specific in my poem. I would make sure it has more vivid sensory descriptions.